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  New Writing Made in Newfoundland

  EDITED BY LISA MOORE

  BREAKWATER

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  Copyright © 2015 Lisa Moore

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  Racket : new writing made in Newfoundland / edited by Lisa Moore.

  ISBN 978-1-55081-609-9 (paperback)

  1. Short stories, Canadian (English)—Newfoundland

  and Labrador. 2. Canadian fiction (English)—21st century.

  I. Moore, Lisa Lynne, 1964-, editor

  PS8329.5.N3R33 2015 C813’.01089718 C2015-904889-3

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  Contents

  Lisa Moore | Introduction

  Matthew Lewis | The Jawbone Box

  Jenina MacGillvray | Gorillas

  Iain McCurdy | Crossbeams

  Melissa Marbeau | Holes

  Gary Newhook | 23 Things I Hate in No Particular Order

  Susan Sinnott | Benched

  Jamie Fitzpatrick | Like Jewels

  Carrie Ivardi | Rescue

  Melanie Oates | A Holy Show

  Morgan Murray | KC Accidental

  Sharon Bala | A Drawer Full of Guggums

  Acknowledgements

  Contributors

  Introduction

  Lisa Moore

  I’M IN STOCKHOLM in a crowded market in the oldest part of the city. Pigs’ heads hanging from hooks, fish on crushed ice, caviar, wheels of cheese, strings of sausage, pigeons in the rafters. There are rows of tables and I’m having lunch with a translator, a writer, and an academic. The conversation has turned to the proliferation of creative writing classes in North America, the UK, and Australia.

  In Europe, apparently, creative writing programs are comparatively scarce. We are arguing about whether there is a place in the university for those programs.

  The academic at our table is a literature professor at the University of Stockholm and she is pale, petite, soft spoken. She wears a cream cashmere sweater with taupe trim, and her shoes match perfectly; she has an iron-straight spine.

  Behind her is an old man. Between the back of his chair and the back of her chair there is about an inch, but people keep trying to squeeze through to get to the empty chairs at the other end of the long table.

  The truth is that this argument against creative writing programs infuriates me. It smells of some kind of faux-mystical idea of talent that suggests only a select few have the ability to tell a spectacular story and they can do it more or less without editing.

  As if there are no techniques to learn, no craft to study, no sweat, no revision, no reading aloud to feel the beat of each sentence, no trying it out first on friends and acquaintances or fellow writers either in or outside of a classroom.

  As if the instinctive creative imperative is never contained, or hammered down with invisible nails and screws to look—yes, absolutely—effortless.

  And is anything but effortless.

  As if those creative writing classrooms aren’t actually secret covens where writers want to share their art as it comes into being.

  Most of the writers in this anthology met in a creative writing class at Memorial University. These writers continued to meet, beyond the classroom, over a period of three years.

  In fact, they’re still meeting. They’ve actually named their group The Port Authority and in these ensuing years they’ve become some of the most exciting voices at work on the island.

  The writers offer each other critical and editorial expertise and artistic inspiration. Fine cheese and excellent wine. Or Cheezies and bad wine, it doesn’t matter—they make an audience for rough drafts and polished works. They form a community where small things, like the just-so placement of a semi-colon or a paragraph break, can lead to ferocious debate. And bigger things can lead to torrents of talk—things like the staggering emotion and profound insight required to make a great story.

  I am listening to the Swedish academic speaking about the European disdain for creative writing programs in universities, and thinking about the contents of the anthology you hold in your hands. These stories are creative and sophisticated in terms of form, emotionally and intellectually affecting.

  Explosive and subtle, politically and culturally aware, hilarious or treacherously dark.

  Take Matthew Lewis’s “The Jawbone Box”: spare, imagistic writing suffused with longing and loss, elegant and understated. It is about a box of bones—jawbones—that are for sale. A travelling home inspector sees a wooden box and a sign nailed to a post on the side of the road. He is compelled to turn back and investigate. The reader intuits the mystery of these bones, the history—what makes us turn back?—and the mortality they suggest. Lewis’s story is surreal and paradoxically concrete, elegiac. Beautifully and seamlessly crafted.

  Or: Jenina MacGillivray’s “Gorillas,” a harrowing and wry story about the relationship between two sisters, one of whom is suffering from mental illness and believes she has turned into a gorilla. MacGillivray renders the tenderness between the sisters, and the tangible havoc doubt can cause. The overarching doubt of what it means to be human, or the academic doubt that troubled Descartes when he came up with the notion “I think, therefore I am”—a notion the narrator concludes is a bit of a leap! Doubt is overcome, in this story, by the inviolate love between the sisters.

  The old man at the next table in the Swedish market whose chair back is nearly touching the academic’s, is a stout man, spittle-exhaling, square-shouldered and silver-stubbled. He ignores the people pressing to get between the chairs. He is impervious to their desire; he is wilfully blocking the aisle. He raises a forkful of mashed potato to his mouth and he is instantly transformed, in my mind’s eye, into an allegory for those against creative writing programs.

  The cream and taupe academic is chirping that in France, especially, they cannot fathom the idea. In France they think all you need to be a writer is a gitane, a glass of wine, and a spark of genius.

  I think of the story “Crossbeams” by Iain McCurdy. It is a joyous gush of language. The narrator describes the “unstoppable forces in the world” such as a powerful, fragile love affair, tumultuous as a Ferris-wheel ride. Language here is unstoppable too—lassoing sentences, roping in undiluted emotion. McCurdy pulls all the stops—this is pure sensation. The story illuminates the ordinary when it’s touched by new love, “when you’re tingling everywhere.” Certainly there are lots of sparks here, captured in the controlled b
urn of fine writing.

  The academic brings up the cookie-cutter theory—that graduates of creative writing programs all write the same kinds of stories.

  How very different McCurdy’s story is from the magic realism of Melissa Barbeau’s story “Holes,” which describes a mythical deluge or an environmental disaster. Barbeau’s magic realism conjures the city busting open and tumbling inward after an evening of dancing in a bar full of sweating bodies, wet walls, noise. Gorgeously dreamlike and urgent, Barbeau’s story is an ablution; it washes over, shines. As the ground opens, leaving bottomless craters all over the city, a sensual tryst turns into a frightening encounter. Barbeau’s protagonist runs away from a man who grabs her all over with crab-pincer hands until, with a violent surge of power, the young woman breaks free.

  The voice and tone in Gary Newhook’s “23 Things I Hate in No Particular Order” is in sharp contrast with Barbeau’s torqued, nightmarish suspense.

  Newhook’s story is charged with anger and absurd humour. The antic narrator is volatile and nostalgic, buoyed by revenge. He is “pissed off and drunk and good and uninhibited” and he can imagine the moment when he must read the letter he’s writing aloud at the next “meeting.” Epistolic in form, the story is a response to court-ordered therapy and an address to an unnamed support group and a doctor. The narrator composes a list of the things he hates.

  Newhook’s fiction laments the “prefabricated shitboxes” taking over the farmland that has been in his narrator’s family for generations and all the many losses that lead to growing up and finding oneself alone. Newhook’s tone is irreverent and gleefully careening—and already we’re about halfway through the anthology and there is a diversity of style and voice, even sub-genre (a story in the second person, realism, magic realism, the epistle), to dismiss the cookie-cutter theory.

  Susan Sinnott’s “Benched” is a heart-rending, redemptive story of a young man struggling with the decision of whether or not to undergo the amputation of a limb after an accident. Sinnott’s writing is precise and as clean as an operating room, unsentimental and convincing. The possible amputation of a young athlete’s limb becomes a metaphor that warns us about acceptance and change. A lesson suffused with a calibrated dread and metaphysical weight.

  “Like Jewels,” by Jamie Fitzpatrick, also shows a family in the wake of an accident, but in this case the death of a young single mother is at the heart of the story. Fitzpatrick shows the traces of this tragedy as it marks the lives of those left behind: shattering connections, disabling and grinding down the family, creating a palpable grief that seeps through generations. Fitzpatrick is unflinching in capturing the claustrophobia of a small town, broken relationships, poverty and family—the need to escape, and the impossibility of escape.

  Carrie Ivardi also writes about escape and accident, but her story, “Rescue,” is populated with young, sexy, pot-smoking, ski-bums capable of giving themselves over to love, to music, to sport, or alternatively, turning a cold shoulder and refusing to commit. Ivardi’s writing is as adroit as a skier racing downhill before an avalanche. These characters are pulsing with desire, but unfettered by gravity. They pass through each other’s lives, provoking thrills, skimming the surface, ultimately seeking the next ski resort, the next love, and the next sensually heightened experience.

  Melanie Oates’s “A Holy Show” is ripped through with dialect, humour and fear, self-loathing and drama. Here is the downtown St. John’s bar scene in the wee hours, electric with errant sexual intent and potential violence. Full of “bitch fights” and spilled drinks, come-ons and threats. Here, as with Fitzpatrick’s story, the particularities of voice and setting in Newfoundland are captured with authenticity. Oates portrays female vulnerability poignantly, and the opposite: a woman alone in a cold city, made vivid with the will to survive.

  The sombre, stark realism of Oates’s story contrasts dramatically with Morgan Murray’s “KC Accidental,” in which the titular character, KC, meets with an oncoming bus and is reduced to a smear on the asphalt. Murray’s story is a galloping shaggy dog romp that ripples in ever-widening tangents, spilling over the rim, exploding our expectations of form (there’s a list of the names of lesser-known Catholic saints that runs to half a page) and plot (corpse switching, bursting caskets, crying elementary children delivered by the busload). Murray explores the idea of contingency and consequence, and the obdurate insistence of bad luck, once it gets a hold of us. There is a new brand of fierce farce here and the comedic moments shoot out like comets, as well as insight about the ways bureaucracies botch those sacred rituals that mark our lives, including the practices for dispatching the dead.

  This anthology’s final story, “A Drawer Full of Guggums” by Sharon Bala, is set in contemporary London. Bala’s protagonist, Cait, a Canadian student of Sri Lankan descent, is rooming with her Aunt Dodo. Cait is studying the Pre-Raphaelite painter Dante Gabriel Rossetti and his model and lover, Lizzie Siddal, for her Master’s dissertation.

  Just as Cait plaits Dodo’s long black hair, so the various strands of Bala’s story weave in and out to form a strong, gleaming braid of narrative. Rossetti’s mistreatment of his beautiful lover echoes the experiences of Cait and Dodo. Past secrets are revealed as the women become dependent on each other, their lives braiding together in a delicate friendship.

  Cait tries to remember the Tamil language she could speak as a child, and drinks tea from Dodo’s china cups, decorated with images of Princess Diana and Prince Charles. The allegiance between the two women is based not only on the brown colour of their skin and shared cultures, but on the differences between them, in age, in colonial history, and finally, most poignantly, on their understandings of love and loneliness. Bala doesn’t waste a word in capturing the complexity of these women’s lives, desires, disappointments, and fears.

  Back at the Stockholm market, the academic, the writer, the translator and I are just finishing our lunch. A young father with his kicking toddler in one arm and a Snugli with an infant on his chest is trying to squeeze through the inch between the back of the old man’s chair and the academic’s chair.

  The old man, Mr. No-To-Creative-Writing-Programs, will not move.

  The young father insists on nudging forward.

  The academic has just finished her monologue about the cookie-cutter theory.

  They say the stories are all alike.

  Yes, I say. Stories that come out of creative writing classes do have something in common: the desire to be different, to push the perimeters of expression, to articulate something essential about human experience. The desire to make stories memorable. But that’s about all they have in common.

  Suddenly the academic, who until now has been nothing but poised and suave, combusts with fury.

  Why will he not move his chair, she says. She’s speaking of the old man. Mr. No-To-Creative-Writing-Programs.The father with the two children is now wedged tight between the two chair backs. The infant is crying.

  The potato plops off the old man’s raised fork and falls back onto his plate. He twists in his chair and his milky eyes behold the young man, and with great effort he rises and stumbles out of the way.

  And I say what people always say about the cookie-cutter theory of creative writing classes: Engineering graduates don’t all make cookie-cutter suspension bridges, but they still go to engineering school.

  Yes, there might be something called talent or genius (I would call it the need to tell a story, the absolute need to voice experience, as urgent sometimes as drawing breath, and the electric charge that shoots through those experiences causing a story to coalesce, or come into being, the big bang of plasma and stone and whatever, that added ingredient that makes a story vital, explosive, quaking). But without craft and technique, the story is nebulous, unsolid, melts into air. Those are things that can be studied and learned.

  The stories in this collection were written by writers who continue to meet in order to hear each other’s stories, to offer critic
ism, to laugh at the funny parts, get sad at the sad parts, to marvel at the moments of beauty and to point out where a small change might torque the whole structure; where a sentence cut, or cut and pasted elsewhere, might bring a scene to life.

  But these stories could not be more different from each other—in terms of style and content.

  What they have in common is excellent writing.

  Craftsmanship.

  I would like to thank James Langer for his editorial brilliance, and Rebecca Rose, and the whole gang at Breakwater for making this anthology possible. A special thanks to Melissa Barbeau for some eagle-eyed assistance. Thank you to Memorial University. And thank you to the writers herein for their words.

  The Jawbone Box

  Matthew Lewis

  HOW YOU READ the sign is, you’re passing it.You’re passing the sign and you have to look back to take it all in. It’s tacked to a maple tree. You turn back to the road. You think about it, mull it over. The caged metal box below. The padlock. The Jawbone Box.When it finally registers, you’re well past it.

  It’s a box for jawbones.

  Now the sign did not specify. You think about it some more but there was nothing specific about the sign. The sign did not say, squirrel jawbones or moose jawbones. The sign did not say, mammalian or reptilian jawbones. Or avian jawbones.

  It appeared to be, simply, a box for jawbones in general.

  You are already four days travelling. Home is still a long way out. Home is a telescope in reverse. That long, distorted corridor. In between is dirt roads, crimped roads, roads scraped clean by asphalt grinders, road blocks, construction crews. The tires whine in the corduroy grooves. In between is new towns and old towns and dead towns. The blast of plant smoke, concrete flues, steam spilling like aerosol whipped cream. The smell is palatable, organic, industrial, edible. The smell is the smell of a whole world under renovation.

  Dinner is a bowl of pea soup and a fluff of pale dumpling. The dumpling looks like a scoop of ice cream with the consistency of marshmallow. The diner has six tables only. It seats exactly twenty-four people. Six plastic-wrapped tables with gingham placemats and each table has a plastic cup full of crayons. There is a bulletin board near the coffee maker that advertises last year’s Christmas dance. A child-minding service with none of the numbers pulled away.